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Posted on 12-19-07 6:16 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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kasto ramro lekheko NCL! merai loneliness ko barema jasto cha ho?


 
Posted on 12-19-07 6:36 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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wow...ma pani loneliness ko best friend. :(

 
Posted on 12-19-07 6:44 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepal Ko Chora,

Sometimes I find myself lonely even though I am surrounded by people, I guess it is just a human nature. Your poem is SHORT and SWEET. Very nice!!! I wish to read more.

Dipika


 
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Posted on 12-19-07 8:37 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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CL,

You adressing me as "NCL" kept me wondering for a while. I read my nick from front, back, top, bottom, short form, long form etc etc but all in vain; I am clueless .  Oh wait...did you amalgamate my nick in short (NKC) with yours (CL) to come up with this new nick "NCL"? Well..I don't have any problem with this amalgmation if you don't have  LOL..  It will be my pleasure to fuse my nick with a good writer like yours  Now don't go editing your post so that this comment seems out of blues.. 

Okay..Enough comedy...now back to the bussiness. Thank you very much for the nice words..I guess in this "land of oppurtunities", almost all are lonely in some ways. As per your comment, it seems your story is not different from mine.

 

Saru_Bhakta,

Thanks for the comment. Sabi ghar ko katha tehi ho. Eklopan ta upahar ma aaune raichha yo america ma.  

 

Dipika,

Thank you very much for the praise. I am happy that you liked it too. Yeah, loneliness is engraved within us in some forms but the situation becomes worse when it starts to haunt you.  

 

Waiyat,

Thank you very much for your remark.


 
Posted on 12-19-07 8:44 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am very sorry NKC,

it was my mistake...... though like ur joke.......ha ha ha ........kahile kahi k k huna jancha accidently hai?


 
Posted on 12-19-07 9:40 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ke ho NKC -> NCL

Loneliness le ta sachikai chyappa paryo ki kaso.

Yaso purwa paschima Drive garne ho ki ta, man bahalaauna. Yata patti hami chhama kere.

Good one, though, once again.


 
Posted on 12-20-07 12:27 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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LOL CL,

Post gari sake pachhi po mero comment le tapai ko kansari ko rau tatne po ho ki dar lageko thyo.  Dhanna, you took it easy..  Aba 2 din ko jindagi ma mari lanu ke chha ra. Ali ali hasa ta garnai paryo ki kaso? Tehi ta accidently dherai kura hune raichha kahile kai..

SurNaTal,

Testo bethai lageko ta haina. Tara kahile kai eso ghar ko yaad aauda lonely chai feel hunchha. Eso mauka milayera teta tira pani aamla ni. Comment ko lagi muri muri dhanyaada.


 
Posted on 12-20-07 7:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NIce poem NKchora ...  keep sharing la.


 
Posted on 12-20-07 7:45 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Beautiful work....dude , keep it up.........


 
Posted on 12-20-07 11:05 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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pjna007,

Thank you very much for the praise and inspirational comment. You also keep on coming with beautiful creations.

uglyz,

Thanks for reading and the propelling note.


 


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