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pacifier
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Posted on 02-14-08 11:51
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Cerine
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Posted on 02-15-08 5:13
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Dananah
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Posted on 02-15-08 8:24
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nck bro!!!...i like to quote someone who once told me " let it flow!" :oD..dun put a dam like some idiot!;oP (tho it wasnt to this high standard and calibre :oD hehe)..seriously u do have a gift of the gab!(didnt come to this conclusion just cos of this post ;oP hehe) :oD...so pls share more with us underprivileged :oD hehe ------ pacifier aka Mr Optimistic?;oP hehe..well thats wat u seemed to me from the above post..dun mind me for coming to such a quickie assumption of u...but it was meant in a good way :oD...keep it up?yeah one can be even more optimistic? ;oP hehe.. ----- ceruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! miss monosyllabic!!..dun be shy to show more words! we know ur hiding them!lobini?;oP hehe.. hope alls well with u? guess wat? met some bhais today..they were pretty shocked(hope in a good way) about me being into mangas haha..shared some spoilers with them since they only watch animes..but yeah ..hows on ur side?:oD..want me to share more?i havent been catchn up much on them for a while :oS..hope alls well :oD
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cheli
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Posted on 02-15-08 9:33
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Poetry is very good as usual, no doubts on that and hats off to you. But, don't feel so alone. Be optimistic. " Kishi roj unse mulakat hogi, Tumhari jaan usdin, tumhare saath hogi." and one huge question!! Why did u said that "yo kabita malai sunya jasto lagyo" ? (mero arko thread ma)... Kaha sunya jasto lagyo?????
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norton
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Posted on 02-15-08 10:00
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नेप्चे ले यो गाममा नि छोड्न भ्याएछ। राउँरो छ।
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Nepal ko chora
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Posted on 02-15-08 11:40
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Pacifier, thank you very much for the "optimistic extension" of the poem. Glad to have you here in the thread.
Cerine, I am happy to hear that you found those lines "awsome". Thanks for short yet sweet compliment.
Dannah bro, I really appriate your suggestion. I will try to come up with something "un-dammed" next time hai ta. Thanks for dropping by to leave a note.
Cheli, thank you very much for those generous note and facilitatory suggestion. It gives a sense of satisfaction when the readers come up with nice words.
नेत्रे जी, तपाईं लाई कबिता राम्रो लागेको सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुशी लाग्यो। पढेर प्रतिकृया स्वरुप दुई शब्द छोडिदिनु भको मा मुरी मुरी धन्यवाद छ।
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uptowngal
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Posted on 02-15-08 11:43
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wowwwwwwwwww greattttttttttttttttttttttt
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Posted on 02-15-08 11:53
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Another (depressing ) masterpiece !
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dipika02
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Posted on 02-15-08 12:04
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nepche, wow !!! I really appreciate the words u've chosen to describe the solitary, keep it up my fren, your poems are beyond venerable...simply awesome
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Nepal ko chora
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Posted on 02-15-08 2:04
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Thulee, I am glad that you liked those lines. Thank you very much for the boosting phrase.
Pjna (Aka Prerana), life is like a pendulum whose extremities are "elation" and "depression". The leg of the pendulum swings from one end to another periodically. So, expressing something on gloomy part of the life once in a blue moon is not a bad idea, is it? I am glad that you found a "masterpiece" in those verses. Thank you very much for those charging remarks.
Dipu, thank you very much for those respectable words. Frankly speaking, I don't want readers to revere my stanzas. I appreciate it when they come up with their honest comment/reactions. But it does give a bit of self-satisfaction when readers like the work. Thanks for your continuous support which means a lot to me.
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