baaaaang..
into pieces..
an utter moment of silence,
then follows a heartbreak, a catastrophe
which swallows
ur imaginations put into shape
ur emotions and repressions
that are desperate to come out
the solid form
of ur liquid thoughts,  feelings that cannot be express any other ways
its like raising a child,
u never think u'll lose it

u cannot react or repent
its gone,
so is the connection u had..
the aftermath would be even worse
ur mind begs u
ur long repressed emotions torment u
they beg to be let free
u are helpless
ur imagination curses u
ur thoughts vaporize and u burn out
but
would u be able to make it again!
alas



(I wrote this poem when a clay sculpture of mind burst while I was baking it.
I had already grown a lot of connection with it. Life wont be the same again without it)

pls comment guys

The title of your thread sucked all the fragrance off your poem.

No one likes to be tricked into reading something. People like you are doing a disgrace to others who might actually have urgent matters they want discussed.

Get a life retard!!! I thought somebody needed urgent help.

thukka bhate...naam pani bhaate kaam pani bhaate..........

I dont even have to read your poem...with the title you had over there.....what a retard....

I doubt you wrote that poem...shud be copy pasted from somewhere or a steal...

its a good poem.

I gave you -ve on your poem. You cheated on the title and didn't even dare to read it.

Good Luck.

retarded poem of retarded khate.

What is a clay sculpture of mind? I hope you're still ok, after it brust! Lesson: don't bake your mind.

my comment seems immature - maybe i get what you mean.

Bhateram,

u cannot react or repent
its gone,
so is the connection u had..
the aftermath would be even worse
ur mind begs u
ur long repressed emotions torment u
they beg to be let free
u are helpless
ur imagination curses u
ur thoughts vaporize and u burn out
but
would u be able to make it again!
alas

Would u be able to make it again!
We don't say alas
Please do keep on writing. You have deep voice within. Just give it an appropriate name.

thanks twanke,

I know it was my fault... the title was misleading...I will post it fairly next time...

Bhate and Twanke would make a good pair.