Nice try. But you need tons of practice man before you go on air. The visual was just ok. The song as a whole sucks big time. Sur, laya, taal kehi ni milya chaina. Dherai nai practice garnu paryo bro. Better go attend some music classes. Hope you post some better songs next time. 

I think you didn't realize the word 'home-made' in this video. If you have please send us a link of some other home made nepali music video!

You need to work on your Vocal , Beats . I guess you tried inserting Piano effects in middle of this music which was bad choice . Visual is not bad still lacks some work on it . How is your studio setup for beat Production ? Sometimes they matter big time .

OMG most of the visual background is from UB, CT. It's purely funny. Enjoyed.

Hey bro totally enjoyed the video, can you tell me me what did you use to create those effects? as for the song please take this as a constructive criticism ok, your song could be better if you had better music, may be add better quality instruments like more Acoustic and some electric rhythm guitar, base, good drums not the keyboard ones, some electric lead and piano and use a better mike and plenty of reverb. make the music a little louder so your voice doesnt stand out that much. OK bro, nice job you have more guts than I do to ost stuff here or anywhere.

this one is a lot better, its simple and nice.