Seriously guys. I posted comment in his video in youtube.   I havent put any swear word. I just put advice.  And this guys does not publish the comment.

              - He is preaching something he won't follow. Seriously, How  would a guy teach somebody a good moral lesson when he tries to cheat himself by hiding negative criticism

          -  he only wants to hear good thing and publish good thing about his video.  Do you think such people can help nepal progress in all honesty.

As he advertised a lot of his video here in sajha,  I felt it is better to tell the comment here.  As I work in similar field, i easily identified such mistakes. I have always taken good with the bad.  I hope my comment  should be taken positively.  But hiding behind and only trying to take praise will lead to nothing.


Here is  kind of comment i wrote,


I think unhappen is a directorial disaster. It is a nice movie with good stories. But there are many flaws to make it UNHAPPEN ....UNREAL.

       1.  A college girl, opening a bonnet of a car during exam time. Seems very unrealistic. Without sounding sexist, how many girls actually open the bonnet of the car when it stalls.


2. At 2 minute 11 seconds you can actually see the shadow of cameraman with TRIPOD behind the artists.

3. Again at 2 minute 10 seconds you see shadow behind when the guy puts the BATTTERY in the car. It is  BRIGHT AND SUNNY behind .  Very next frame it is all dark behind. Which means A VERY LONG TIME has passed between two shots.


4. Lots of continunty error. You will find more than one example.  For example, at 2 minute 43 second when guys closes the bonnet of the car there is no white van behind.  But soon in the next shot when girl is shown a white van is parked.

5. At 4:37 you see two girls standing in front of building. what happened to them next second?

6. At 1 minute 37 you can again see a shadow of cameraman moving behind the girl.


movie making is a difficult art. If it is not done in right way and have too many inconsistencies it would not look real .

this guy deleted my comments too!!

I have really tried watching some movies made by our Nepali brothers and sisters like the following:

Unhappen
Undecided
Un... etc

But I can't seem to sit through the whole thing.

i agree TM. the acting doesn't look natural. it looks fake and kind of overacted and i just can't tolerate that.

 

 I guess the creator is not professional and is more obsessed with story and has no clue about technical issues..

Clearly continuity error is present everywhere...but he should be able to take even negative criticism if he wants to progress in the field..

not jus continuity...but also lighting issues...where is the source?  that is basic thing...

This guy is completely obsessed with his work. He just want others to praise his work. This guy has uploaded his video in each and every Nepalese sites he came across. This should never happened.......................................!!! 

The main message of the film had nothing to do with the "love story" that took more than half chunk of the time. It was just so poorly tied. :(

And, could they not find slightly better looking protaganists?

Dude, I see what you're saying and I criticized his work too. But do you think it is worth the time you are putting to reap him apart? Not worth it bud.

Even though the acting is bad, the movie is nicely done. It is a short movie and storyline and the message is accommodated nicely in such a short time. Acting was suffocating though . If he wants to censor your comment, he has the right to do that, but you are talking about it here and he can't take that away.
Nicely done

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