Get this so next time you dont have crap your pants :) 

Goood work! 

ps. strawberry car scent is gay!!! 

Nice! Liked it. I would love to see more in future.

Let me tell you what's good and bad about this movie.


I think the way it is picturised if very good. The scene and settings are fine. Acting is fine too.


But let me point towards negative about this video . I am just telling you because we learn more from our mistakes then our success.


1. I believe movie is slightly fast paced for a horror movie.  I does not bring that much fear to the viewer (or it could be just me).  Horror  movie should be slow . 50% of the success of horror movie is its background sound. Slow pace with background sound can create magic. Viewers are always guessing what will happen next.  of course you need fast pace at some instance. But it should mostly be slow


2. Camera movement is another problem. If you watch video camera is not still at some instance.  of course you need to follow the movement of the protagonist...but it should be stable like it should not  move up and down rahter it should follow the motion of the actor. Infact in 59 second,   you could actually see the car from which video is shot.  You can see it at the bottom of your screen.


3. Honestly ghost is not scary at all. It seems like you made ghost in preproduction and attached something to his face. It would have been better if you don't put mask. But make it as a ghost in post production by the use of software. Using software you can actually change the face of the person

4. There was one major continuity error. The protagonist take his Hair band in 3 minute 3 seconds. You could see his hair is not tied at 4 minute 29second. The protagonist runs when he sees the ghost..........at next scene in 4 minute 33 second his hair is nicely tied with hair band back.

 The storyline of the story is good. Sound effects could have been better.
I dont need to say anything bcoz no quiero has not left any stone unturned in commenting about the short movie.
The analysis by no quiero is too professional.
The hard work you have put into the movie must be appreciated. 

Why are amateur nepali filmmakers hell-bent on making horror movies? Is this the influence of Zee Horror Shows you experienced as kids? Or really, have we run out of issues to make any movies in the first place?

This one is not good at all... Nothing in there ....

Pls try to make more scary next time......few things i had noticed @ 37 secs the guy is driving Nissan, @57 secs the same  guy is driving a Toyota Solora......

I think u should work really hard ! sorry.