Beyond the helpless sun you shine,
through the darkness that paves you,
awaited did I, oh! how ever!!

Was a time when I thought you were mine,
for did you ever, for did I ever,
awaited did I, oh! how ever!!

Superb! poetry you wrote on a wine,
nothing, for nothing that amuses me,
awaited for I, Oh! how ever!!

This might just be the last time,
for oh! witches did you brew,
await shall I, oh! how ever!!

Fathomless, into the deep,
I feel myself drowning,
into your melting brown eyes.

One touch, a caress,
I hold my breath,
as I sail across the Shangrila.

My philosophies, my fears,
merging into one confusion;
the perfume permeates the air,
as I step into the unkown.

All past forgotten in the moment.
Erased!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will I survive this amnesia?
Will you ever?????

wow...poem dohori..nice ones though...

One from my side..not complete though...
"An Ideal Love Song"

Sweet aroma of love
rising up through the air.
the love I am getting so less,
The love that is so pure.

For love, I won't have to look for...
for love, I won't have to try.
Love, that I desire, is somewhere for me,
for the love,I won't have to die.

The love, that will help me shed tears...
In swarthy nights,the love will make me shine.
The love, I won't have to share,
the love, I can say is all mine.

Hey u ,you got the love I want
you're more than just fine
even when I see you at night
I'm blinded by the sunshine

Many times I've waited
in the tumultuous storms
when I finally met you
I felt a new love being born

Don't know what it was
that first caught my eye
but you've given me
a feeling,that always keeps me high

Never have I felt this
in this life before
but everything about u
I will always adore

Just waiting for the time
to arrive with you
there is so much more
than just a beautiful view

gently touch my soul ,
through your words of wisdom,
breeze me into the vine,
through your art of love,
I shall perform the dance I did,
with the creaking of the woods,
howling of the moon,
tones of twilight,
the place where I sleep,
in a peaceful slumber!

you will step into the known,
quite maginificent, but gentle world,
simple and lavish, flurry of vigor,
only the place for beautiful and the bold!

come out of your amnesia,
open your eyes gently,
see the world with love,
my heart awaits, vehemently!!
fo will you ever?


Nirman,
the love you depicted there is quite beautiful. keep it coming :)

this treasure of love which i cherish within my soul
at the moments as i look into majestic sea.......
i wonder would u ever know how much u mean to me.
u will never really know u bring joy to my heart
i wish i could walk to u and say the words which lovers do
but now here i stay looking at wordless clue
imagining the things which u might ever view....


mein sayaar to nahin magar yeh kavii jab see dekhaa aplogaka kavita
mujhko sayariiiiiiiiiiiiii agayeeee.;)



aiightt sab ek see ek kavi ......kavi ko khoi k bhaneko thiyo astii ekjana mitra le:P samarohaa ho ki smth smth ta yaha po bhayirakheko cha...robert je ko poem ko reply chai sitara di bata auncha bhanera kurera baseko;)tyaakaa milerakheko.dammmi!
i mean ramro cha bhanu khojeko:)
ani badarni sis as usual loved it!
nirman aba k bhanu kavi ,lekhak :)hmm good work.

thanks, badarni....malai pani tyasto feeling chali rahechha.... (;-D)

i enjoyed reading, everyone....thanks! malai ta kabita lekhna aaundaina ni....

Good going all... nice poems... hehe... keep it coming!!

Very cool poems!!!

I am sleepless in my slumber;
Where is my discipline,
when I allow you
to seep into my dreams;
Unravel my resolutions,
and like a spin doctor,
cure all maladies
of my heart;
Build my castles with
wispy bricks of vague
sweet nothings?
And
When daybreaks,
each dream's meticulously
labeled, listed, classified
into yet another
psychosomatic oblivion.

~sitara~

bob, you are awesome....

sitara...wonder how you make such impromptu poems....I am always at awe....

Ruina bahini......incredible....just teach your dai how to write poetries..

might I unravel now,
I am the wizard of love,
label me not therefore,
for has witches ever brew with clove?

your maladies of heart,
that is not akin to pain,
unleash some poems,
for the mist will touch the rain!

castles? I have a rasping shack,
build with every inch of miraculous wood,
surfaced with shades of castleous touch,
come, if ever you could!

visit the pineyards,
where meadows drift through the air,
spirit of the gentle lake, on a silent haunch,
Do you fear the force to bare?

dance down the corridor,
let the flowers bloom you,
let your arms wide open,
for the woods will greet you!

John,
Thanks for your comments, Sir. Just having a very brighter saturday morning, so unleashing some of those maladies, as the witches would say, brew 'em :)

john da
hehe that was kind word for me:)
sitara di and robert jee keep goin.....i am enjoyin...(rythmic bhao wwaaaahh poem jastai goin enjoyin;)

ma pani aba ruina sanga tuition padhna jaane, poetry ko.

ruina malai application form pathaideu na hai. Ki tetai aayera bharnu parcha :0)

chitoo answer deu na hai, ma pani kavita lekhne kya aba. hya poem nabujhera babbal bhai sakyo, office hours bhana malai ani I will be there hai ta.


Will be waiting for ur maile kya.

sorry for harkey dai no tyme LOL
better luck next time!

Hareeeeeeeeeeeeeey, k bhaneko ruina testo, mero mutu nai chasakka bhayo kya. Malai ta tyo herne bittikai mutu ko byatha le choyo, jasto cha,

Well whateva. Here is one from my side, completely dedicated to my sweet ruina, hai ruina........................

Don't worry with written permission from girly. ;0)

Null part of moon
Can be so beautiful as ur face,
Brightest glowing candle
Can?t ever give light as ur smile,

No any dawn
Adoring than ur eyes,
None dusk
Pleasant As ur words.

Every time I see u
I love u more
The second I see ur smile
I fall in luv with u

Each second my eyes
Seeks ur presence
Ur spell of luv
Has bound me

U r first luv
of my life
u r last love
in my life

u r my life?...........................





NB : Don't ask me who is that u

awww harkey dai is being romantic here:P
trust me not gonna ask who is that u bhanera:D


u are talking about someone's beauty
dear dai u talking abt someone's smile?
falling for eyes and smile
comparing with null part of moon and candle lights?


who is she i dare not ask?
whoever she is might deserve that
but u are being little naive and vague
dont u think she might expect more ponache:)

p.s ..thank u harkey dai.....but girlu le mutu maathi dhunga raakhee bhaneko hola.dont hurt her hai bhandeko cha:P
dont hurt her i tell ya.(warning:@ ...............LOL).

I'll dance!
with...
Seasons of change,
change of heart,
changing tunes,
waning moons!

I Ching's ways,
Tao's waves,
energies move,
nights and days.

Dancing queens,
Slippery floors,
gripping rails,
setting sails.

Tippity toes,
Tappity halls,
resounding windows,
Sound proofing walls.

We'll dance up the tango,
Not tangled nor twisted,
pure joys of motion,
not one step wasted.

Step-stepping on high-wire,
Mozart's balancing my reason,
Chopin through misty waters,
Vivaldi's Four Seasons!

Yes, shall we dance, yet??!

~sitara~

;) Thanks John and Ruina!

I believe in no love
-newuser.

Beyond doubt, I loved her
Oh how dearly I loved her
Would there be a more absolute truth?
My heart that cries in the middle of the night
The wet pillows and my moist eyes
The memory that follows like a shadow
Could there be a surpassing testimony?
LOVE
They talk so much about the false truth
The intricacy that never unfolded
I tried and tried to comprehend
But never succeeded
The word that induces hatred
Adversary of my austere existence
The nucleus of my sombre countenance
What the hell is love?
I believe in no love.