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Posted on 04-28-05 3:11 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 04-28-05 3:34 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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interesting can you show more light on the josh character
 
Posted on 04-28-05 3:44 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nice recount of yet another episode of "tales from the midwest"
 
Posted on 04-28-05 6:56 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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And and........
 
Posted on 04-28-05 11:58 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Randy Travis and Shania Twain were performing live when we were leaving and Josh fretted over leaving so soon, but we had been there for six hours and were tired by the huhub. We drove past a dusty lane and merged into interstate, talking something that would have been esoteric to a humble mind. Our talks were simply gibberish....we talked about automobiles, money,drinking,fishing and hunting. No one dared to discuss academics on a weekend or any other holiday, it was an unspoken promise.

Josh's family owned a fleet of yacht at Pascagoula and two service stations at Moss Point. They were businessmen for a long time and strongly disapproved of he going to a grad school. He had a lot of stories to tell about his redneck folks but I was never interested. I had had enough of rednecks.

We stopped at a local honky tonk three miles east of Pascagoula. It was a wretched nightclub that looked like a smoke stack inside. With little neon lights, few strippers entertained the boisterous crowd. Me and Josh stood out instantly since neither of us was a biker nor a fisherman nor a farmer and nor a construction worker.I was so scared I wanted to bolt for the door the moment we went inside. Our arrival evoked lots of curious, and hostile looks. The strippers were middle-aged and were gyrating at some lewd number I never heard before. Each time there was a new song...the revel seemed to be much more prominent. I shook my head in disgust and was wondering what made Josh stop there.

Two men approached us as we sat down. One was a hulk of a person with piercing and tattoos all over but the other seemed like he could die at a drop of a hat - a sharp physical dissimilarity between two humans is not often visible at one time. The big guy looked at me as if he had never seen anyone from Asia. I almost got into my feet and ran away until one of them patted Josh?s shoulder.

'So they were friends', I calmed down for a second.

"Bubba and David, meet John", Josh introduced me.

Bubba was obviously the big guy. He gazed right through me, his eyes penetrating all over my body, stopping at my heart and stopping it for a second. The thought of sprinting out of the bar returned instantly, but I held my composure and pretended not to be intimidated.

The little guy whispered to Josh and they went in a private lounge for a minute, leaving me at the mercy of Bubba,who, at every second reminded me he could break all bones I had. I thought of talking to him....but thought it would provoke him more. I then tried not to be scared and remembered all those moments in the gym where I and John pumped irons.

'At least I could put up a little fight and run away'. I reassured myself, but the idea of running away simply did not disappear.

A woman in mid thirties came to us, sat down in Bubba?s lap talked to him which was not audible in the blaring music. Soon they were kissing....and I tried not to look at them. Bubba did not believe in privacy and he certainly did not believe in interruption either. So I let them kiss, at least Bubba would mellow down for a while.

A woman across the table blew a thin streak of smoke and winked at me. I kept a straight face....wondering if Bubba owned all the women there.One mistake, and......curtains.

Josh retuned alone but carried a paper-sack along. I stared at Josh, if looks could kill, he would have been long dead. But that was a look of anger blended with desperation. I was angry at Josh for leaving me with a monster and was desperate if he was repeating the same again. Josh smiled at me, as if he read my eyes, patted bubba in head, and blew a menacing kiss to Miss Bubba-lap. We were leaving.

Josh started the engine, drove for half a mile and pulled over in a gas station. Then he pulled out the paper sack from under his seat. There was a sandwich bag, neatly sealed with some white fine particles inside it. I knew instantly I was in thick of trouble.

"Cocaine". He chuckled, "don?t tell me you haven?t seen it".

I had seen cocaine only in movies and was not ashamed of myself. He then, to my horror, put a little heap of the powder in the dashboard and snorted it like a pro.

"You drive dude", he said,"I am taking a back seat".

"If you sell it in Hattiesburg, it is double the price, Montgomery - triple the price, New York - Seven times the price.. He was talking to himself, eyes closed.

I drove as if I had seen a ghost in Mississippi. But could not help smiling. Josh Whitemore, a straight A student at our school was actually a dope dealer. I drove fast, fearing the drug would soon start effecting by the second. Josh might get hyper and kill me, he may even have a gun. Who knows? I would never wonder about Josh's extravagance and replenishing affluence anymore. He may buy an aircraft tomorrow, but it would not bother me. I was contented in my old Toyota.

I got home with heavy feet; it had been a long day full of surprises. Josh had gone home, and I was suddenly missing my daughter.

Christmas was two days later and my Toyota took less than 14 hours to reach Cleveland.

 
Posted on 04-29-05 3:25 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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typos again, sorry
 
Posted on 04-29-05 5:40 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Brilliant john.I am sorry but I am envious of the exquisite style and profoundness in your story. Write on so that we can get a better value for our time in sajha.
 
Posted on 04-29-05 7:27 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thanks newuser,

I wonder if I could write anymore, my research is at stalemate.
 
Posted on 04-29-05 9:05 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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John, Great narration! Always a pleasure to read you.
 
Posted on 04-29-05 9:26 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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John bro,
Exquisite writing.

When I read you and Sitara, I usually ask a simply tangled question-which normally goes unanswered "how do they write so good?" Of course, I am referring to English writing.

Nepali ma ta aru pani ghag haru chhan sajha ma.

Hope to read more from you. Narration is truely captivating. It is my pleasure to read you and Sitara.
 
Posted on 04-29-05 9:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice narration John. Always a pleasure to read my fren's butler's anecdotes. Keep em' coming.;)

I'ld have preferred a touch more memorandum on that pretty barmaid. Hahahaha..
Conjointly, if you had mentioned the 'cost' of that white 'shit'/oz, for the sake of it, it would be have been great. Kati hola sachai?Am curious.

Nice try in the other thread. Hahaha. Forget the stalemate and feed us with some more of your pieces.

Indisguise:)


 
Posted on 04-29-05 11:27 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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i have a feelin i know the josh character pretty well now..anywhere from Nebraska-Texas...if thats a fiction i sure can tell you there's a josh out there..and his name starts as ross..hahha..did you catch it??johnny??
 
Posted on 04-29-05 12:43 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thanks deep,
I get my lessons from Sitara, 42 minutes every morning before I serve her bagles and waffles. I then drive her to work. We have an evening class too, if you wanna join us you are most welcome. Anyone can write better under Sitara's tutelage. LOL.

I believe you get the humor, Sitara is a writer par excellence, I am just a novice.

Sitara,
Thanks for the complement, I am making a cheesecake for you tonight.

Indi,
That barmaid's name is Heather, you can find her at Beau Rivage Casino 6 days a week. Me and Josh never talked about the dope again, methinks it is outrageously expensive.

I seriously have to think about my research, we are at a standstill cos we are not able to test our model, seeking approval from Georgia tech or Tulane to allow us in their lab.

Hush,
I never write fiction, nor do I exagerrate. Josh is still here, his last name is not whitemore though. Privacy issues....you know.


 
Posted on 04-29-05 12:48 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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jhon da;
as usual read with full interest....nice :o)


 
Posted on 04-29-05 8:58 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hats off to you john dai...aabo dai sanga tution linu parla maile re kya...Sitara diz sanga tapainle tutition liyechhi maile kahan baata cahnce paunu uha sanga re kya..hehehehehe
Nirman
 
Posted on 04-30-05 12:00 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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thanks ruina,

You are always so suppotive.

Nirman,

I was never a good teacher.....so forget about any help from me. But Sitara is a good one...and she may have sometime for you.
 
Posted on 04-30-05 12:14 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Maybe Sitara diz will give a lesson or two!!! I just wonder.....If she has tyam...
Student( आज्ञाकारी रे क्या)
निर्माण
 
Posted on 04-30-05 6:35 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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John I have to say ... that i have never been fasicinated by anyones writing. I dont like reading books as you know... But your writing is exquisite. It is short and it definitely grabbed my attention...I hope we will see your work of art soon... Nice job...
 
Posted on 04-30-05 9:08 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Speak for yourself Deep ji. Very few have I come across whose writings are simultaneously exquisite and eloquent in both Nepali and English. Saanchai bhanney ho bhaney daha lagcha malai. But, it's a good thing!

Smooth John!...Yyou deflect the attention to Sitara! :) I wouldn't in my wildest dreams aspire to tutor you. So, stop spreading rumours that "tuition ma bharna khulyo!" Nirman, tyam syam ko kura hoina na ni... my sole purpose of tutoring would be to have over qualified students like you and John and learn from you guys!

By the way, John, your superb butler-ship is making me lazy, fat and unindustrious... so I am thinking of terminating your services, with a walking bonus, ofcourse! It will break my heart but, it has to be done. :)
 
Posted on 04-30-05 9:17 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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John ko narration always so fresh and pleasing to read. Keep writing...this forum needs a good writer like you !!!
 



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