Hey all sajhaietes,
I have written a piece from my side. Can you Please read it and comment from ur side. If u want to read more..please post it I will continue it a series...I promise with twist and turns...:-)...anyways Write comments and U may share ur writings too....No boundaries...
here is a piece from me..

LOVE: UNSPOKEN
It was Friday. I still lied there still awake...Homework to be finished. Homework never fascinated me, the only reason I did it was to escape from the punishments. Also I have to finish it now, tomorrow we were to shift apartment. With my father working as whole-timer in a Communist Party at that Panchayet era, there was frequent change of places for us and continuous change of friends. With homework finished, I went to bed? there was whole new day ahead.
Strange eyes were peering into us as we transferred our goodies into our new dwelling. We were used to it with so much of shifting places. But I still remember those hazel eyes watching me as if I were a prince from Caribbean. There was much more works to do rather than watching back to those eyes, rooms to be cleaned and set up.
She was our flat partner's daughter. We were in other words next door neighbors. I think she was 7-8 in those days, I exactly don't know, never asked. After she saw me the first thing she told her parents was that she would marry me someday. With her mother so much chit chatter, the marriage thing was now widespread all over the flat within 2 days. With myself being only 11 years at that time, I was so irked by the fact of marriage. My entire cousin soon knew about this and my marriage was gossip of the town, and I simply hated her for loving me. My cousins would tease me every time I meet them, which irritated me more.
She used to come to talk with me; I would irritate her with my gawky voice whenever she came near me. I was petrified of gossip of marriage. I would confine myself whole day in my room on holidays rather than to talk with her. She was only friend available within the community but I was rather reluctant to speak with her moreover to be friend.
It was raining that day, I was just watching the drops of rain falling on the ground, wanting to go and get wet in rain but afraid that mom would scold. I didn't notice her but next thing I knew was she was just sitting next to me.
"Rainy day, huh??" she started the conversation.
"No, a sunny one, with sunlight everywhere." I started my mission.
"Do you like to get wet on the rain??" She asked.
"But where is the rain?" same gawky voice.
"I always like to play in the rain, it is so much fun." She stood up, and walked toward the rain, without even being irritated with my replies.
"That is what I also want to do" my inner soul told to me.
Without even caring of mom's tough rebuke, I also ran toward rain. Next thing I knew was we were playing in the rain, carefree and like flower children, the children of nature. We were all wet, all covered with the mud and all dirty, but who cared when one can have so much fun. That night I was thoroughly scolded by my mom. But that day, a friendship started, not to end I thought.

indi baba timile poila aunchau,mandir ma bihe garchau,mwaii khau bhaneko bhayee kaha hosh pardaina ,dhanyabad bhandai basthee ra........(oh god i am blushing!!) ...............>
maile ajhai lekheko ta erase bhayecha niiii kasto hola:(.....
its like this hai..........timile poila aunchau.mandir ma bihe garchau,mwaii khau bhaneko bhaye ma kaha hosh pardiana,dhanyabad bahndai basthee ra?! mero thulo thulo akha tardai .blush bhayeko face jhan rato garaundai lagayeko sandal dukalnu thalthee ni:P
. Chati bata mutu niskina khoji rako cha ala D'Mask esshtaila ma ;).........................>
k garnee timro jhyaan ko lagi bhayee pani sab kura maile feri lekhnu paryo.mutu chatti bahira niskihalyo bhanee ma k garnu?ajhai cardiologist bhaisakeko chaina:(

Tyo wakkye haru timro lagi thiyena. Tut. Ma timilai Wal-mart ra K-mart ko jeenis ra chappal dinchu hola ta. Timilai ta Tiffany's & Talbots and ofcourse V "gopyes" aka victoria ko secrets bata lauchu ni ;.............................>anii yasko lagi pani hosh pardaina dhanyabad.....i dont like gift from..........person in disguise:@

dukhalnu=fukalnu
Phewwwwwwwwwwwww....:) Ke ke matra garna parne timilai bujauna pani. Maile KARENT slow pass gare ho ahile?:p
thanks ...tyati dherai kasta gareko ma :O)
aba maile bujeena bhanee paachi slow current nai mannu parla:)

Indis bro...

gana ta ramrai gayou tara ek line matra bhayo.....;) pheri usko aafanta ayera geet lai pura garlai ni ..

aankha ni sankaune kasto tyo chala
taruni jiskauda kutai khala

baru tyo bhanda ta yo geet ramro huntyo ki...

baisa ho yo phool jastai chaki hala natra oolincha...
jawani ko garmi mausam, naselaudai tapi hala
lai ja lai ja lai jau meri reuna

hahahhahahahaaha seusi dai!!
gana ta ramrai gayou tara ek line matra bhayo.....;) pheri usko aafanta ayera geet lai pura garlai ni ..

aankha ni sankaune kasto tyo chala
taruni jiskauda kutai khala ................>
first of all ta muri muri dhanyabad.....kasto tyakka mileko hau indi lai:O)

baisa ho yo phool jastai chaki hala natra oolincha...
jawani ko garmi mausam, naselaudai tapi hala
lai ja lai ja lai jau meri reuna ....................................>
ahhhahahhahha lauuuu yo chai suneko chiana hai maile gana .afai compose garnu bhayeko ta hoina...;O)

Seusi dai.. Dhayebaad :)... jiskaune ra jiskini ma kehi farak po cha ki. Kunatai na khaiyela ki.

Albeit a reflection of the former, latter is more my eshtaill of having some phun, ofcourse in disguise:)

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Runa timro komal pau chumeko sandal jhan kasto hola. LOL.
" Mujse khus nasib to tumharee sandal hein, aap ke karib to hein " ;)

Chumera tee komal pauu haruu, timro chadke ankha ra rato gala leeee
Malaiiii barbaadaiiiiii paryooo ruina timrooo satailleeee :p

Josh apart. M :(.
Could i have felt lop so deep, yet there are no traces left.
You talk to me like you would to a stranger;
your eyes do not have any reminiscence of the past;
Could i've been so wrong in believing in you.

Kehi mero personal diary ko kabita ko pana bata kehi timro bata mathi ko haraf prastut gareko chu. :) Asa cha sakaratmak 'response' pauchu.:p

In Jest,
IndisGuise:)

Ruina

that song is from movie LOVI PAPI... that song is really a sobber vulgar song..

Lai jau lai jau lai jau mero hajur ( instead of Ruina, its hajur)
Mero maana mero dhaana
Mero yaoban, mero joban
Lai jau lai jau mero hajur

baisa ho yo phaala jasto, chakhi hala natra oolincha
jawaniko garmi mausam, selaudai jala
tapi hala, mero hajur
Lai jau lai jau mero hajur


if you know what i am trying to say .. Just like my nick..... dont you think so????

The second daughter of the landlord
you wished to love this tenant
But he knows yours is not a love
that is just an infatuation only
focus on your own studies
the time to love has not come yet
FOR YOU

- the tution teacher in disguise

(sorry for meddling, have fun guys , good going)

indi ;
just gave title of best friend to u..
not being aware of future
handed all my love to u
not thinking this much will i torture
am i wrong in understanding u....

well thats for u.........my favourite poem ko part 2.

seusi dai....
hmmm ho?! tyaso po.yeh!:O)
maile lovi papi nahereko le hola ,
ur nick is sober vulggur ho?!!maile ta chinese name bhannu thaneko ....seusi(break)pinyin matrai namileko k ali kati.
tyo song ma hajur nai thik cha ..ruina suhaundaina raicha.

Newuser,
Thanks for your concern. Tara maile alik bujina, hajur ko 'nisana' kaha thio.

My studies, are behind me;
I try to learn each day though.

Love - it's not, you say;
Infatuation it is you claim.
My friend, it is neither.
If anything, it is a jive - maturated.
Nothing more, nothing less.

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Best friend, ---me? Am honored.

Your love you handed to me..
I'd make sure not to disappoint thee.

And, oh yeah..
Tortured & me? In sajha? Come on now....

Nope you are not wrong;
But are you right - in understanding me?
For me, it is a question beckons
To be or not to be.
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In jest,
IndisGuisE:)

P.S: Newuser aren't we all mature enough to understnd the significance/differences of virtual & real world....ho ki manche haru aru nai kehi sochera pani auchan.

lol
Indisguise broda
Seems you understood that like an abstract art.
Mine was just a verbal volley that came up in mind without thinking. Immature or mature, I don't really know. But that was intended to 'the second daughter of the landlord'. Are you a daughter? Definitely nut.

'focus on your own studies
the time to love has not come yet
FOR YOU '

That was the message for the second daughter of the landlord. No worries for you mate. Keep it up.

copying your own style
In zest,
newuser

Nirman jyu,
I didnt realize that I had missed the last episode of ur story until now!! How dumb can I be!! and needless to say this one was as good as any other :),,.. keep up the good work!!

nahiin..............mero katha lekhne thaun ma lop story suru huna thalechha...tyo pani INDI ko..yo indi ko love story pheri start..yo indi ko kura maile bujhna nai sakina...kahile Rhythm lai side hanchha..pheri yehan aayera RuIna lai...aani don't dare compare my story with that "Just Mohabbet"...damn i hate hindi serials..if mine story is also like themm..then they sucks too...I hate my stories then..Arko bhaag nalekhne...hehehehehehehehehehe....:-P..(((Bhau Khojeko)))...;-)..anyways ppl keep posting...
Till next time,
NIRMAN...(*_^)

Ruina.....Just interested..... kaha bata ho?
Ani bhale ho ki pothi ho ni?

well kasaile bhau nadiye ni mero naya bhaag post gardai chhu...padhnu hola bhanne aasa chha...aani please don't tell its like those cheap hindi serials...IT HURTS...:-P...;-)
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The situation at her home was getting out of all boundaries. Her parents would have fight everyday and at nights whenever hr father would come home her father would bit her mom. At times, my parents would have to intervene. ??As parents fight, the child suffers.?? All those times her parents would be bitching each other, she would be just alone at the rooftop with tears in her eyes. Those tears I would not want to see and seeing those I would think of beating hell out of her father (must have been Hindi movies effect). Her father remained villain for me, whom I would want to beat becoming a ??Hero??.
Most of time, I would just sit beside her whenever her parents would be fighting downstairs, and my parents trying to resolve their fight. I would desire to take her away from all those miseries; I would love to carry away all her pains. At least I would love to take her pain away for a moment, so she would smile, smile as a child, and smile in the same way as she would smile before.
Maybe it had been the weirdest ides, but movies always were the greatest fun or getaway for me at the time. And I thought of taking her out to movie; maybe she would love that, I thought and forget all those miseries her father had created. For a moment, maybe I can make her happy and see her smile as before. But for this there were obstacles: first of all I hadn??t spoken to her yet (yet not intended to) and I didn??t wanted anyone to think I was taking her out to movies just as that.
I had cousin about her age who lived in the locality where we lived. She (my cousin) would frequently visit us and was good friend of her. One problem was solved as I could ask my cousin to ask her out for movies. But another problem popped out, what reason I should give. And that day, seeing the women??s line at Viswajyoti lot shorter than men, reason also popped out in my mind, "to get tickets easily". This reason I could validate with Pee and with other whoever would query. I did my simple calculations and went to get my cousin hooked up with my simple plan. But as they say "napatyaune Khola le bagaunchha" my cousin did drowned me. My cousin asked for ice-cream treat at Nirula??s, if she was to ask her for the movie. Without any choice, I had to drown.
Movie was alright, and I could cover its expenses with the savings I made. But treat, Pheew, I had too much to cover the cost that would come. To cover that, I had to sell three of cassettes from my favorite collection, which I did very heavy-heartedly.
The choice of movie was even weirder. It was newest flick released at Jai-Nepal (Old One with bora ko seats?K:??). I choose the movie as it was starring Shahrukh Khan and movie was "Ram Jaane", a hard core action movie.
Well but we sure got the tickets easily, and moreover, we all enjoyed the movie (I think I did, for others I m not sure). And the treat, I am sure she loved that. She laughed on the chit chats, Pee, I and my cousin were having there. For that smile of hers, I would have killed anybody.

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P.S>>>aani thank u for nice comments Rhythm ji...tapain lai sano sallah matara..INDI baata hosiyaar hai...hehehehehehehe..no hard feelings hai indi bro...as u say just in Jest....
Nirman...

wow! my heart pumps out to say wow to ur story ,Nirman.

Nirman,dun know why but i found ur story more intimating with ur fren pee than with the gal.Whenever u described ur moment with pee,its sounds realistic to me.Urs and peez relation appeals to me.Pee must be a great person. Of course ! both of u must be lucky chaps to have one-other as a fren.

ruina.....Just interested..... kaha bata ho?
Ani bhale ho ki pothi ho ni? ...........................>
first of all kalo_bhale welcome to sajha land.newuser ho jasto lagyo.
anyway bistarai sabai thaha huncha.herdai janu naa sabai question ko answer afai thaha huncha.ahile nai sabai bhanee bhanee majja nai ayeena ni hoina ra:P


Nirman;
ramro cha keep it coming,
timro story just mohobbat bhanda ramro cha
trust meh maile tyaslai kahile keep it coming bhanina but jahile aunthiyo i guess tuesday/thursday.:P
timro ta i enjoy so keep it coming.
silent reader bhaye bhanee pani count meh on one who enjoy ur every episode....:O)

Lau Ruina,
hajurle malai tettikai sanka garne. Ma sadhai newuser nai hu ra newuser nai rahana chahanchhu. Afno naam pani kasaile change garchha patak patak.
Lau hai kalobhale jyu , ruinalai ekasplane gardina paro hami duita chhutta chuttai janawar hau bhanne kuro.

lau Ruina,
hajurle malai tettikai sanka garne. Ma sadhai newuser nai hu ra newuser nai rahana chahanchhu. Afno naam pani kasaile change garchha patak patak..............>

newuser jee.....hajur lai hoina auu bhaneko.maile kalo_bhale new user in sajhaland bahyeko le bhaneko nii.new to sajhaland ...tyahi bhayeko le bhaneko hajur ta aba evergreen ni kasle k garnu ra tyo name lai;o) kasko himmat !!

Lau hai kalobhale jyu , ruinalai ekasplane gardina paro hami duita chhutta chuttai janawar hau bhanne kuro.......................................>
eksplaain garnu parda hmmm hajur kun janawar ko kunni tara kalo_ bhale ta janawar nabhayera pankchi(bird) jasto lagyo:P pic pani cha tyaha hernu taa ani afai clear huncha ko kun janawar bhanee. anii hajur chai kun janawar sorry tyo chai ekasplain garnu sakdeena ma:P

Dear Nirman jyu...
Abba what more can I say about your peice... I am always waiting to read the latest one.. and this one is as good as any... You really have a talent of expressing yourself through simple and effective words... hope to see more of it soon :)

And about InDisguise ji.. thanx for the warning,.. but I can handle him!!;)

Ruina jyu,

hajurle garnu bharaichha agrako kura
maile samjhe gagra ko kura

k garni aaja weekend ma ghar ma thunniera baseko dimag ali bodho(blunt) bhaechha. Tei pani I am sorry bhane hai.

Aafulai ta newuser bhanna sath mai hu jasto lagna thalyo Sajhako sangatle.
Newuser