Hey all sajhaietes,
I have written a piece from my side. Can you Please read it and comment from ur side. If u want to read more..please post it I will continue it a series...I promise with twist and turns...:-)...anyways Write comments and U may share ur writings too....No boundaries...
here is a piece from me..

LOVE: UNSPOKEN
It was Friday. I still lied there still awake...Homework to be finished. Homework never fascinated me, the only reason I did it was to escape from the punishments. Also I have to finish it now, tomorrow we were to shift apartment. With my father working as whole-timer in a Communist Party at that Panchayet era, there was frequent change of places for us and continuous change of friends. With homework finished, I went to bed? there was whole new day ahead.
Strange eyes were peering into us as we transferred our goodies into our new dwelling. We were used to it with so much of shifting places. But I still remember those hazel eyes watching me as if I were a prince from Caribbean. There was much more works to do rather than watching back to those eyes, rooms to be cleaned and set up.
She was our flat partner's daughter. We were in other words next door neighbors. I think she was 7-8 in those days, I exactly don't know, never asked. After she saw me the first thing she told her parents was that she would marry me someday. With her mother so much chit chatter, the marriage thing was now widespread all over the flat within 2 days. With myself being only 11 years at that time, I was so irked by the fact of marriage. My entire cousin soon knew about this and my marriage was gossip of the town, and I simply hated her for loving me. My cousins would tease me every time I meet them, which irritated me more.
She used to come to talk with me; I would irritate her with my gawky voice whenever she came near me. I was petrified of gossip of marriage. I would confine myself whole day in my room on holidays rather than to talk with her. She was only friend available within the community but I was rather reluctant to speak with her moreover to be friend.
It was raining that day, I was just watching the drops of rain falling on the ground, wanting to go and get wet in rain but afraid that mom would scold. I didn't notice her but next thing I knew was she was just sitting next to me.
"Rainy day, huh??" she started the conversation.
"No, a sunny one, with sunlight everywhere." I started my mission.
"Do you like to get wet on the rain??" She asked.
"But where is the rain?" same gawky voice.
"I always like to play in the rain, it is so much fun." She stood up, and walked toward the rain, without even being irritated with my replies.
"That is what I also want to do" my inner soul told to me.
Without even caring of mom's tough rebuke, I also ran toward rain. Next thing I knew was we were playing in the rain, carefree and like flower children, the children of nature. We were all wet, all covered with the mud and all dirty, but who cared when one can have so much fun. That night I was thoroughly scolded by my mom. But that day, a friendship started, not to end I thought.

k garni aaja weekend ma ghar ma thunniera baseko dimag ali bodho(blunt) bhaechha. Tei pani I am sorry bhane hai. ...............................>

newuser ji,tyasto galtee ta kehi bhayeko chaina sorry bhanee jasto.
anyway ani ghar ma kina ni thunnera baseko yasoo fresh hunu parcha ni ta:)


hajur ta sajha ko newuser ni aru ayeko jati sabai sajha ko new user..difference hernu na;)

Bholi mero test cha, aaja sajha ma post nagarne mood banayera login pani gareko thiyena. Kina kina yo thread dekhne bittikai kasto kasto laagera aaucha. K garnu aajkal sajha ma mero guest appearence huna thaleko cha. Dui tin din ko answer ekai patak dinu pareko ma chyama prarthi chu.

Ruina jeeeee, me doing fine and good. Ahile ta as strong as bull bhanchan ni, testai testai hunu lai sake, ali weak bull chai re kya. ehehehehehehehe. I am outta bed now. Any way thanx for ur concern and best wishes, best wishes of true frens are always valuable. Hoina ra.


god bless u

thnx sahina for ur comments..and yeah we sure are lucky to be fren of each other..problem is only that i haven't met him in last 5 or 6 years ( lost account actually)...we talk ocassionally.. but as they say what remains at last is the sweet memories poised inside our heart, all those moments cherished together will remain forever in my heart..wish that we can stiil be same old children and hang around without any hussles and tussles of this adult age...Just a dreamer's Dream...:-)....thnx everyone for nice comments...
Ruina Ji lai bisees dhanya baad hamro indi bro ko kura katidinubhayeko ma....
aani rhythm ji le mero sujhaab sunnu bhayeko ma khushi laagyo...aani ruina bela ma bichaar puryau hai Rhythmji le jasto..pachhi dukha paula...hehehehehehehhe...anyways ppl have fun...tara hamro Indi kata gaayo..katai aarko khojna ta gaayena..:-P..hehehehehehehehe
Indi bo eestyle ma....In jest
Nirman...{^_^}

Newuser bro,
whoz D second daughter of the landlord? Ki ktm ma tution padauda kheri ghar dhani ko chori sanga ILU ILU. Hahahaha. Alik bujina maile. Hehe. Kehi katha cha bhane bhani halnus.
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Nirman,

Maile koi sanga boleko dekhi nasaknne timi pani. Haha. Jasusi matra garera hairaan cha. LOL. thatta gareko aka was kiddin and enjoying some nice conversation with our lovely ladies, timi pwakka pwaakaa kura laidine tyasai. Artha ko anartha lagaudai Bhad bhailo machau. HAHAHAHA. Mero pith ma "ram puri' ghusai halne timi pani mauka pare.

"Just Mohabbat" ra timro esstory are ditto. Yeutai cha. LMAO. Jiskeko ni feri dude. Feri, bhuima ladi budi khella royera Nirman. LOL. Aiight dude. Waiting for next part.

And yeah, this phrase... "For that smile of hers, I would have killed anybody. "

Well, this one phrase sounded a lil cheesy to me. Total, sallu bhai in "tere naam" hahaha.Just letting you know hai feri. Arko part chadai post gara la. Padnu man lagiracha.
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"timro story just mohobbat bhanda ramro cha
trust meh maile tyaslai kahile keep it coming bhanina but jahile aunthiyo i guess tuesday/thursday.:P
timro ta i enjoy so keep it coming. "

"Ruina Ji lai bisees dhanya baad hamro indi bro ko kura katidinubhayeko ma.... "

-----> Hame to apno ne luta, gairo mein kaha dum tha, Meri kasti thi dubi waha, jaha pani kaam tha. :(

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Rythm ;), Are you sure you can handle me? Ofcourse you can, who better than you eh?
Feri malai jorr ka jhatkaa dheere seeeeeeeee dine hola feri.
Anyways, nirman ko kura sunnu, ekdam janne bujne manche cha. Ful tyam job nai mero tariff ko danka fukdai hidne ho. LOL.

Nirman, kantipur ma pani dee hala Notice. LMAO. Did i smell somethign burning.
No offence Nirman bro, Like i say...

In Jest,
IndisGuise:)

hehehehe..hansaayo indi bro le..Kantipur ma nikala re suchana..baatho rahechha kaag bhanda..kantipur ma nikalyo bhane bidees ma basne haarule thaha paundaiona bhanera....hehehehe hansaayo...aani mero full tyam job tmile bhaneko jasto hoina ni ho....ma ta mera pyaara fyan haarulai yeso sallah sujhab diyera prem ma nafasoos bhaneko matra ho..:-P...:-P...aani maile peeth ma rampuri ghusayeko hoian yaar...malai indian mal samaan man pardaina..maile ta swiss chakku ghusayyeko...heheheheh..LOL....
Just Kidding,
Nirman..{^_*}

Eh Ruina ji,
Well, maile ta bhusukkai birseko ni, that i have asked you a question bhanera!
kata kata jhukkiyera yaha yeso paseko ta mero question ko ta answer nai answer ko badi po raichha............ha ha ha.........ma bhane hussu question sodhya chhu bhanne pani birsechhu..........
Actually i am a new user, saying truely i didnot have interest to surf sajha at all earlier. Sarubhakta-II kai agraha ma woosko kabita herna chire pachi Yeso kura bujhdai jada yo sajha ko kendrabindu chai Ruina ji nai ho ki jasto lagyo....(Ki maile dherai bujhe ? sorry hai .......)........Lol, Don't think that this Kalo_bhale has started to do kwak kwak for u.......Ha ha ha

eh sachai, arko new user ra ma maa alli pharak chha...............waha parnu bho sayad rato bhale, ma chai kalo bhale.............

LOL;
kalo_bhale ji
Yeso kura bujhdai jada yo sajha ko kendrabindu chai Ruina ji nai ho ki jasto lagyo....(Ki maile dherai bujhe ? sorry hai .......)........Lol, Don't think that this Kalo_bhale has started to do kwak kwak for u.......Ha ha ha ........................................................................>
laaa!(ali achama pareko way ma)maile k bhanna khojnu bhayeko bujdai bujeena..
hajur le dherai bujeko ani maile bujdai nabujeko laa baara bar bhayee jasto cha.

saru bhakta ji le lekhnu bhayeko kavita padeko thiye dada ko thread ma:)hmm tyaso bhaye hajur haru saathi .feri pani welcome sajha ma .surf garnu thale paachi bani hataunu nai garno nii sajha bata..tyahi bhayera ma pani bistarai try gardai chu .

r u serious!u do kwak kwak strange!! khukhura le pani kwak kwak garcha?!

dhila nai sahi bhetaunu ta bhetaunu bhayo answer.....khusi lagyo.
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----> Hame to apno ne luta, gairo mein kaha dum tha, Meri kasti thi dubi waha, jaha pani kaam tha. :(

direct dil ma pe war huwa.maile ta man pardaina matrai bhaneko thiye just mohobaat..k thaha tyasma timro kasti dubcha bhanee:(hang in there ma aundai chu life boat liyeraa....

Hey where is my another fyaan these days,...ardent bro where gone..Rhythm ko paachi laagera mero katha padhnai bhulechha ki k ho bro le...hehehehehehLOL..
just kiddin,
Nirman

Ohhhhhhhh .....nirman i am urs fan and always be ne....ur fresh part was equally interesting ....keep posting new ones....love to read it ..........and when i forget to put posting on our new episode........just treat it as "me being a silent reader" ...he he he ............Anee Rhytm ko pacchadi lage re...he he he....Rhythm bhaneko ko ho....pls remind me...he he he

I am an admirer of Ardent and also Nirman's Story. The last episode of Nirman was touchy. "For that smile of hers, I would have killed anybody." This was superb.

I am an admirer of Ardent .......
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What did i do such extraordinary that U become my admirer Sristi jee....he he he ....

heheheheh.ardi ko naya fan..badhai chha broda...hehehehehheheheh...ardi bro ta kaamamaal chha..hey bro i m huge fyan of ur Humour..makes my day everyday yaar....and visit the Playgroun: Come share the joy of life....I m trying ur path but rather in more vaster way..inspired by u...;-)

I'm hangin in there...
Hope you won't be too late ;)
No worries though..
I'd wait for you at heaven's gate.

Hehe. Chadai au hai ta :p
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Ardent, even I've enjoyed you humorous postings. Keep em coming. you rock :).

Sristi ji, the exact same phrase that you mentioned, made me feel like a lil filmi. Instead of 'killing somebody" I'd have prefered something like " what'd I not do....... , Or I wish I'd do more for that smile"... yestai yestai.

Do not take it otherwise. I absolutely love the story. It's just my point of view.

Anyways nirman, Love story ko itihass lekhera ajai love ma nafasaa bhandine. And for you info, I am imune to swiss chakku :)

In jest,
IndisGUise:)

'i'm hangin in there...
Hope you won't be too late ;)
No worries though..
I'd wait for you at heaven's gate.

Hehe. Chadai au hai ta :p

heaven's gate are?!!heaven gate pahunche tumhare dushman:P
i wont be late.u have to hang for meh!!
chadai aunchu..ma make up nagaree aunchu ni;)

Nirman broda ko thread ta dating spot bhako cha ni sajha ko.


Nice work nirman bro. eheheheheheehe.

wassupnirman you're getting jealous of ardent's fan again...are you nirman or nirmala????????????????????? "all in jest""

hey Nirman... waiting for ur another piece..kahile aaucha?? to be continued bhanera kurda kurda patience nai sakki sakkyo... anyways... nice work...hope to read the rest of ur story pretty soon... good luck!!

Aiight tweets, will hang in there....

Feri Titanic ma jastai 'too late' nahoss... :p

Regarding you not doin any "make up"

Suun lai khol chahincha ra?. Feri timi ta heera ;)... tyasai pani aru nakkali chamkine patthar haru bhanra " Twinkle twinkle" bhaihalcha ni. ;)

Anyways, ekdam sancho nabhayera ayooo timilai dekhera hola:p.
I got da "FeVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR" :(

In just,
IndisGuise:)

Anyways, ekdam sancho nabhayera ayooo timilai dekhera hola:p.
I got da "FeVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR" :( ....................................................>
fever!!laa hey bhagwan k bhayo timilai?!dhami bolaunu jam...ramro dhami ako cha re pallo gau ma:P
..timilai sachikai fever bhako ho bhane may be due to cold hola.tato tato luga lagaunu ,soup khanu nii yasto jado ma pani muscle dekhayera hero bannu parcha katti samjhaunu chiso lagcha bhanera:Ptake care and get well soon.

ehehehehehehehe. ruina pani yaar. that was good suggestion ruina jeeee. U r awesome.
tara yeuta kura kya, hamro didi broda lai tato luga lau bhanne hoina ni ta, jaad khau po bhannu parcha. Maanche herera po kaam garnu paryo ta bhaneko. Ki kaso indi broda.

bro tanna daru khayera dui din suti deu na, maa kasam parsi palta ta timi jhakkaaaaaaaaaas, hunchau yaar.



La hai ta

Daru bless u

re kya