Very well written
Often times, a good poem is best left cryptic. BUt if you don't mind, would you care to elaborate on your poem? I'd like to see if I was right on thinking what you are trying to imply here.

  First of all, "Thank you" and i really mean it  for asking me to explain the poem and especially THIS poem because i let it land itself
at the end.So..there are two prospective of poem you can think about.:

The first is the "ME" vs "The Other" ...As i see them inside the glass ..incaptured and helpless...this is the world  we are living .....suffocating inside the glass  and unable help each other... even unable to  listen eachother. ANd i think like me, they are tring to say the same thing.. they see the same thing that i see..i see them inside the glass and they see ME inside the glass..and we both can't hear eachother so its an infinite phenomena of communication..

The second prospective is "ME" vs "ME" ...incaptured in the glass ...i see myself with all the trauma ...and since "Sisa' can be synonym to the "Mirror' ...the whole episode is about "ME"  talking to "alot of ME" in the mirror because i believe  the mirror can reflect various aspect of you .but we remain unheard by our  own voice. 

The use of "म हरु" in the last stanza can be applied to both "various ME" or the "Others" those who are self in themshelves.

Let me know what you came up with..i won't be surprised if it was completely different then my thoughts. 

And i always appreciate you comment...

Thank you !!

Brilliant
Better than my interpretation.
I equated "sisha" with prosperity, you know how they say people who live in glass building and all. I thought you were hinting towards how constrained these rich people are and they are asking you for something, perhaps help..but it is not clear in this material world.

I liked your "self" version; I should have noted the difference between the first stanza and the last stanza-I thought they were the same until I re-read it.

Please write more. If I see a bad poem, I chose not to comment as I am not a big fan of poems. But few good poems force you to write something and this is one of them. Anybody can appreciate such a poem.

brilliantly written.

 Thanks guys !! 

 

 

धेरै राम्रो सिर्जना झ्यौकिरी जी 

म पनि अलिकति थपडी हालम 

आफ्नै सोचाई ले पिडित