dekchidriver,
you have an acute sense of humor. I laaike, hev fife. The piece was funny and entertaining. Thumbs up from my side. As they will all say, Keep em coming.

:) ....loved it !

Piggy thnx. FF I loved reading your suicidal piece about trying to kill your girlfriend, in vain, which kinda made me think about mine so called friend. :D So in part you helped spark the fire. I promise to keep on writing if you promise to do the same.

 

Cheers.

dekchidriver, This is a very interesting read, I enjoyed every bit of it thoroughly. Thanks for sharing the story.

Friendship with limited benefits sucks sometimes, though its better than friendship with NO benefit.  LOL. You will surely miss her, not just because you had some private and intimate time with her but also because you could not do IT. Remember how people talk about baseball game when it is a No-hitter?

Keep writing!

Sumiit. LOL! Im gonna miss my NO-Hitter. haha. true true. Thanks for the feedback, always good to hear them.

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We have wonderful storytellers in here. Great one, dekchidriver! : )

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Great writing skills!

really enjoyed it-- looking forward to more of your writings in the future.

Thumbs up bro

Wow! Sound like an ocean city experience. Anyway, I envy people who can write well. I'd rather see you have a blog. I have read a couple of writers who once in a while post some stories but it's unable to keep up with it in sajha. It's better guys such as yourself have a blog or a place other than sajha to express themselves, but continue to post in sajha as well. Are you a local ktm product or did you study in India? I'm amazed at how well Nepalese have begun to write.

I appreciate all of your constructive criticisms. Thank you.

 

ugrad02: Yep been to OC a couple of times. But this time its a different place, but same sheeez. drivin around in kitchens ;) lol. I do have a blog, but its a bunch of personal stuff on there that might not really interest anyone. Hidden amidst those are some other writings. here's my blog.

Feel free to browse.

 

 

Never read such a captivating flow!

Thanks for sharing.