The eyes wonder in the darkness that prevails,
Not a beam of light it detects,
It searches forever for a soothing sight,
But no where can it find the healing light.

Memories and darkness is all thats left,
Who can one blame though for this theft?
The bliss and happiness all gone away,
Only on misery and agony the heart can lay.

A breeze blows softly bringing memories to mind,
Of laughter and smiles that is now left behind,
A dagger on the heart feels hard and heavy,
Tears flow from the eyes and the heart bleeds softly.

A relationship that was so pure and devine,
Still turns the heart warm and makes the eyes shine,
But the pain soon follows and the eyes weep again,
Going back to the darkness and to the pain.

The wind of sorrow had blown into life,
Cutting into the heart with the sharpest knife,
The sweet dreams, the whispered promises!
All lies.. all treachery, it was all blindness!!

The future ahead seems bleak, the past all narrow,
All I have left is my lonliness and sorrow!!

nice:)

Indisguise.. the lines you added are really nice and touching... :)
specially the last lines about a new begining... i wonder y I cant think of new beginings.. thanks:)

Tweets :)
----------------------

Anj, TY.
Often we are so engulfed and surrounded by 'greek tragedies' that we forget that we need to keep our eyes/mind/heart 'open' to see/feel the new begining.

Perhaps picturesque scenario has eluded us for far too long, thus glumness has overtaken. I suggest read the thread "is it not what we feel often" or something like that. I bet it will refresh you and THEN you will see a new begining. Hehehehe. But proceed with CAUTION.

Nevertheless, your poems has a soul ( bhaneko you write it by heart), mine are just a nonsensical outpouring of unfelt emotions more often than not.
Bich bich ma twaacha ke. Hehe. Hope to hear more of your creations.

Indisguise:)

>>Nevertheless, your poems has a soul ( bhaneko you write it by heart), mine are just a nonsensical outpouring of unfelt emotions more often than not.
--beleive me Indi...ur also seems to me through ur heart showing the rays of hope..May i see more of ur works??
Nirman

babbbal poems.... applauds... to all of you..
gotta love a good writing..

I guess this is my first successful try to write something with a positive ending. Though this poem is not good. Just some mumblings and jumblings!

Closing my eyes with a hope of tomorrow
Thinking not of the dark pitch of sorrow.
Happy once but sad yet again
On went the cycle and on went the pain.

Sadness deep inside but the reason unknown
Emptiness throughout yet the heart not torn!
Accompanied by all but feeling all alone
Liked by everyone yet loved by none!

Trying to discover the dream of ecstasy,
A tinge of hope, an unknown fantasy.
The heart yearned and the eyes searched forever
Wondering what it might discover.

Believing something was destined to be,
Confident to find the future ultimately!
Not caring was 'was' or what 'exists',
Mind all set on what will persist!

All life gone away as an unfulfilled dream,
Yet not realizing what a waste it had been.
Always emphasized on what 'would be'
Life spent away as a voyage to destiny.

Never realizing the beautiful things,
Never saw the flower bloom or heard the bird sing.
Never felt the love in his eyes for me,
Nor knew the hurt of being dismissed.

Life always was what I thought it to be,
A burden on the back or a world full of glee.
But on a search for my tomorrow,
I had rejected the joy and embraced all the sorrow.

The sadness, the pitch, the heartfelt pain
Was nothing but the happiness I had slain.
And today when I lay in my loneliness,
I look back and see all I have is regrets!

But is this all my life is worth?
Either live in the fantasy or count my loss?
Then I look around and see a charming butterfly,
And oh! Is that a rainbow I see in the sky?

Is it love in your eyes that I see?
And are you smiling solely for me?
And this warmth that I feel deep in my heart,
Was that what I was ignoring from the start?

When the blindfold from my eye is taken away,
And as I learn to live in my today,
Everything is life seems so nice and perfect!
Can?t believe this part of life was so neglected.

Not caring was 'was' or what 'exists',
-----------------------------------------
oops please read as --not caring WHAT was ot what exists

लाखों वार जान कुरवान कर देंगे
तुम्हारी केवल एक मुस्काहट पर
प्यार ना तो सहि नफ्रत ही सहि
एक बार मुस्कुराओ तो सहि. :p

"Is it love in your eyes that I see?
And are you smiling solely for me? "

Twiste hai ta.

In my eyes,could it be love - or lust?
I'll tell you if you know - must;
In my eyes,could it be love or lust?
These are just words, plese don't trust;

It is both and more, that you can not see.
My my smile is for your fren sitting next to thee. ;)

Baki pachi...

Hehe. Bhandya ni. Anyways, mo gaye tauko dukho.
Khai "Nice" bhanne manche bepatta cha. Baru dadaG le thaha bhe khabar garde hune :(. Ke furthio hamlai. Sauteni ama ko chora jastai garcha hamlai. :(.

Haha. Aiight Later.;)

In jest,
IndisGuise:)

वाह वाह! पुष्पपुरी!
तालियाँ तालियाँ!!

घचक गयो नि। अरु नि दिम् न फिरि।

>>Khai "Nice" bhanne manche bepatta cha. Baru dadaG le thaha bhe khabar garde hune :(. Ke furthio hamlai. Sauteni ama ko chora jastai garcha hamlai. :(.
मलाई भुन्या हो?
Herum jhulkinchhan ki.
Ani kasle, kaslaai sauteni Amako chhora jasto garyo भन्या?

In jest,
:)

Is it love in your eyes that I see?
And are you smiling solely for me?
And this warmth that I feel deep in my heart,
Was that what I was ignoring from the start?


awww...very nice ..beautiful!! Anj..yup u gave the positive ending :)

Nice Anj...Keep writing...:)
Nirman

Touch my heart, touch my soul
Let the words roll.

(Trying)

Thanks to all of you for your comments. Really appreciate it. :)

Ho ni aba Sajha ma dadaG bhanera kasaile aru buje ta ke.

Kasle garyo bhanne dada yaar, yetro ishara le ni ekchin muskurauna aieena. Dada ko naam ko bahana le auchin ki bhaneko. Khai. :(.

Yehi kura ma ma yeuta sunya sayari dinchu hai.

din beet gaye... raatein kat gaeen....
tere intezaar mein jaanam sadiyan guzar gaeen...
kya yeh mera pyar hai... ya hai meri gustakhi....
ya teri bewafaee hai... ya fir koi majboori

khai aba ta jhulkincha ki ;).

In jest. :(
---------------------------------------

Mathi Nirman le "more of my works" bhanya raicha ueelee poems ma. Chana ta cha, uu jamana ko. Himmat aye rakhum la ni hoi. Aiight pal. Later.

IndisGuise:)

P.S: Hi Janavi! :) hehe.

Garam Himmat Indi pro...aaru Pro Guys Birodhi bho bhandai ma daruainu pardaina k...:p....:p...
Ma chhu la tmro pachaadi...;)...darr namane hunchha...:)
Keep writing man..paare writ halamala ni re kya..:p
~Nirman~

well good to see Anj presenting her poem in optimistic manner;
as everybody said indeed a nice poem.
applauds for ya.
keep it coming.well being a silent reader enjoy reading ur poems.{khusukka bhandeko aju}
and its good to see ur changed view.


uh huh,
indi
here i come ur" nice" person!
do i have to repeat nice?u know me don't u?
yup ,once again NICE poem.

hummm!
sayari eh?ma ta budi bhayo ajkal. dont feel like posting these days haha
abu ta jiskine pani aundiana:P
well u wrote one for me(i guess) so here is something for u..its not sayari its song/gazhal.
arz karti hoon;)
aap ki akhoon ney samjha dosti ki kabil humey
hei dil dhadkan theherja milgaye manjil humey

adaab!:P

in jest (returns back to u indii)
ruIna

dada wo hen hao(me fine) xie xie(thank u) nin ne?(and u?)
well lemme guess, u are perfect!:)


~*ruIna*~

Behan,Deuso,Sanjh Hudai...
Din Afno Bato Lagyo......
Ani Feri Ratri le Afno Angalo Fizyain
Din vhari Ko sangharsha Paschat
Thaakit prani ma
Afno Aankha Chimulera
Ratri ko Andhero ma
Haarauna Khojdachu........
Din Vhari Ko Bhaag Daud Pachi Ko
Yo sunyaat pani Kati meetho...
Ma Dubi dinchu Raatri Ko
Naasha ma Magna Vhai
Bhooli Har pida.
Beersi Haar choot,ani Veedana
Birsidinchu Aafai Afai lai
Samarpan Vhai Ratri ko Purnata ma
Ma Feri Ek choti Swarga Lok Pugi Dinchu.............

Khojda chu ma Kaslai ?
Yo Andhkaar Ma
Jaba ki mero Afnaai chaaya
Mero saath chaina..
....... 2 be continued
( Good Night )

Entrapped by you: my heart and soul,
Broken into halves, yet seems as a whole.
Screeching and whimpering, awake all night,
No peace of mind, no savior on sight.

A moment of silence, then continues the noise,
Inaudible, yet the presence breaking my poise.
Imagination faking the basis of reality,
Normal in the world's eyes yet filled with insanity.

Illusion fills the restless core of my mind,
Though somewhere I know I have left you behind.
Embracing you close and feeling your presence,
Do I hear your voice in the stillness of silence?

Close to me, in my arms you lay,
In my thoughts sharing my misery you stay.
Yet when the eyes open and I seek your hand,
The loneliness I feel, I cannot understand.

In the mirage of life, companionship I see.
The reality though crashes, forcing me to percieve
The lonliness that engulfs my entire soul,
Choking the life out of my fake made up world.

Then again dazed I get and enter my dream,
Which often I see and rest all goes dim.
My eyes are open yet I cant see the world,
All I feel is the emptiness as you I hold.

Illusion and reality intertwined as two colors,
No black, no white, only the horrid gray bitter.
I am scared, I am hurt, wont you come rescue me?
Do you even exist? What a fool I have been!

Close to my heart, though you always lay.
As I think of you I silently pray...
If you are an illusion I dont want the reality,
If this is fanatical, then what is sanity?