Pretty deep meaning,very casually written lyrics, adds a lot of flavor to the melody
Well done. Keep up the good job bro. Next time, sing out more loud.

yea BobMarkey.. I though so too... whoever did it.. did it really well
 but people comment here without listening haha
Please, Listen these 2 songs... they are among very few nice Nepali Raps among rest crapss

Off Again,

Similar irretational piece ! A song has to be pleasent to listen, this is not pleasent to listen so I dont care much about the wordings first.

Yes I understand different people have different taste for me these are not song its a NOISE POLLUTION.

This is song http://youtube.com/watch?v=pGvYXnjAnc0&feature=related for me and there are a lot.

disgrace audience

Nice ............

Video was even better. Matched very nicely.

Liked it.

**** (half)

the secon one was cool

well written but they should have sang in different genre like pop or rock or sad mood or something else  u know. It doesn't sound pleasant when nepalese rap and sing about our country. When people listen to it they listen to the tune and the way they singing they dont listen to the lyrics so its better to change the genre i guess.

 I second Sampada. Only good lyrics can't make a good song.  I am not against rap but the way these so called singers are taking singing  so lightly  just polluting  and degrading real meaning of songs. Even for singing rap you need to have  atleast a bit of  music knowledge and talent. I found none in this song.(first one). Harsh,eh? Gotta tell the truth  Anyway, Goodluck for future.

Samapda, I also share your sentiment. Melody sux !

Spring,

I said different people look for different things in song and first thing for me is the Tune and which for these songs I just hate it. You may look it differently. I didn;t said only good lyrics makes a good song, I said these comes only after you are impressed by the tune of song.

Madtech, If you were expecting all good comments then sorry, I got to speak what I feel. I really hated it.

i_nepali, I guess we must have some common way in selecting what means "song".

Thanks

Sampada

This is crap.You call this singing? Wasted my 5 secs. Nepali le hip hop gayeko suhaudaina.

Second one is cool bro ...

Before start of rap the song seems to be fine !

And yea there is error in refering to gurl, "garchha" is not used for a gurl, "garchae" or "garchin" !

It was fine then those previous ones though !

But have  along way to go

Sampada

madtech,(the first songs)- i like the lyrics most but the essence of the Chinese instrument sound strange from the norm originals Nepali tones.It sounds odd in  mixing result ...i mean the ambience imagination.The has many beautiful classics background of the patch you can complie just to bring the nostalgic feels about fond and patriotic mood to love mother Nepal in rap synthesis with folks melody.I wish to imagine Nepal with its beautiful mountains, the paddy fields, flowers,rivers or the scenery peoples in raps version, but from the musics it disturb my joy with the sad tune of the chinese violins, the lyrics is  credit for  standard rappers resonance...

The lyrics for the 1st rap is good, political, through common word expressed for a women but poetic. It really made my day, I'm listening it again and again. Really enjoyed it. The 2nd rap was not that good at all, I've heard many of these "on your face" lyrics, feels like he has to pee real bad, he's in hurry. I don't like his voice either, it's got too much "ish" at the end of every sentence, monotonous. The lyrics is intended to be good but needs lot of polishing.

rewire , i felt the same way and i posted here in u tube...

i dont who who  raped it though....but it was presented nicely

Sampada,

 I second your opinion that means I agreed what ya said  and that "good lyrics ...." was my own view...   I know it totally depends on what ppl like ..."pasand apni apni khyal apna apna".......

bring it on guys