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Posted on 06-04-08 2:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I wrote this on December 17 th 2006 and wanted to revive as it seems so relevent to political development in Nepal

 

फेरेको लुगा सच्चा कांचुली निस्कियो !
शत्रु त, मार्नै खोज्ने न्याउली निस्कियो !


दरबारमा ‍आज निर्मम् सुनसान,
नँया घर-बास खोज्न मूली निस्कियो !


हुनु भयो गाईजात्रा अलंकारको
ट्यूनीकबाट दुबै बाहुली निस्कियो !


कर्म काण्डको कारण कठै कहिन,
पगरिको टुप्पाबाट शुली निस्कियो !


हाँक धाक रवाफ सुन्दा सिंहै भनें
घाईते स्याल भन्दा मामुली निस्कियो !


 
Posted on 06-04-08 3:14 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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वाह ! वाह ! वाह!
हुन त यो गजल अज भन्दा पहिला नै पान गरी सकेको थिएं तर आज झल रसिलो लाग्यो। समय सापेक्ष, सुन्दर रचना। २ बर्षा अगाडि नै आज को दिन कल्पना गर्न सक्ने तपाईंको कल्पनाशिलता लाई सलाम छ।
 
 
Posted on 06-04-08 3:21 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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>>हाँक धाक रवाफ सुन्दा सिंहै भनें
घाईते स्याल भन्दा मामुली निस्कियो !<<

समय सापेक्ष सान्दर्भिक

 

 


 
Posted on 06-04-08 3:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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दुई वर्ष पुरानो रक्सि या गजल
बिर्खेको मनमा खुल्दुली निस्कियो!

 
Posted on 06-04-08 3:25 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Shirish sir को समय सापेक्ष रचना पढ्नु को रमाइलो नै अर्कै हुने, तर यो ट्यूनीka शब्द नेपाली हो र?

 
Posted on 06-04-08 3:29 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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वाह ! वाह !
sarai ramro lagyo

 


 
Posted on 06-04-08 3:33 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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राम्रो छ शिरिस जी।अर्को पनि जावोस
अनी चौतारीबारी कहाँ गयो भनेको त सबैजना गजल सुन्न बेस्ट रेइछ

 
Posted on 06-04-08 5:10 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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भन्नाले सात दल र माओवादीले अन्तरिम सम्विधानमा सही गरेको पर्सिपल्टको भावना ।

अनि वास्तवमा स्यालभन्दा मामूली हुन पुगेको पात्रले पछिल्लो समयमा देखाएको gracefulness ले उप्रति मेरो केही सम्मान पैदा भएको छ । सहानुभूति होईन, सम्मान नै ।

अनि बिर्खेको शेरलाई पनि मेरो वाह वाह छ है ।

Nepe


 
Posted on 06-04-08 9:09 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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rahulvai, serial, spring, rawbee

Thank You ..Thank You.

Birkhe

I think you were influenced by that recited poem in Tanneri.  o ?\

Tara

Yes Tunic is an English word. I think it has been already customized in Nepali too.

Nepe,

I was writing about "graceful exit" in another ghazal. I was helping a friend to write a resignation letter and came across the word "graceful exit" and that influenced me to write that.

 The ex-king had to show graceful exit due to various reasons. You know why.

Hillary is going to make a graceful exit.

When Saddam Hussein was executed, I felt bad for him. Your sympathy to GShah is totally  that of a human.

 

 


 


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