poor child in the rain...
poor child in the rain...

we r free to go...
free to climb the world...
love and war again....
hatred and insane...
heads are cwarling on...

death is yet to come...
fear not to face...
face it with full heart...
wat is there to lose...

poor man in the rain...
poor man in the rain...

who is it to blame...
u r all insane...
why run after fame...

get ur heads all up...
what is there to fear...
swallow it with wine...
drink till you r mine...

kill yourself with words....
add a lil rum...
words r all you got...
eat n drink with it...
chew it till u can...

violence in my hand....
kiss me with sweet death...
life is yet to go...
long long way to go..

poor man still in rain...
poor child still in rain...

Think this thread is read by us two only...:-)...anyways machul...keep posting...at least there are us two...Keep rocking man..

hey machul...lost or something...post some new yaar...i m waitin for it...

hey nirman..i appreciate ur encouraging words.....well am on vacation myself.... havent been writing at all lately... will surely. post some if i do come up with sth... why dont u post ur stuff.... would luv to go thru them.... its amazing that u still remembered this thread...

Here is new one though but not to my expectations...
its titled
"Life Line"

All u thought as stream of your life,
merge into mere line one day.
A line with illusive images,
A line with strange distant voices,
that hunts you and feels u as a culprit.
Hunting you with its furious eyes and fierce claws.
you run and tun and run to find,
find the lost meaning of life, and fail once again,
coz you are already traumatized in between the lines,
the line so called life...

Crap...just dragging

Miss Jhyam_putali .....

fine crap .. so it be... how about u stand as a role model n show ur not-so-crap PIECE !!!

we r alll waiting with eyes WIDE shut !!!

Sicko !

Ma_Chul,
If Nirman and you have to share poems with each other, why don't you just email each other? LOL..why bore all the other people at sajha?

hey jhyam bhai or maybe dai...whatever i don't care...well if its crap then let it be...but this sajha is not ur bau ko birta to say "Ma_Chul,
If Nirman and you have to share poems with each other, why don't you just email each other? LOL..why bore all the other people at sajha? "
if u don't like this post then don't visit this again...and morever don't read the things....
u enjoy ur things we ll enjoy ours...
Mind ur own business...and don't act as if Sajha is ur own private property

well....ramro cha hajur haru le lekhnu bhayeko poem ....keep it up...
i will be audience afterall there should be audience also..
may i??
just confined myself to u
not having any choices
shared my feelings to u
not knowing its consequences
am i wrong in believiing u???

Whats up Ruina

hmmm up??sky no no..... ryt now i am inside my room so ceiling .....
what type of question is that....
hehe hii chico whats up?

jhyam putali..... each word of urs shows how pathetic u could get...... we were just asking some real piece from u... real not-so-boring stuff from u.... why r u backing off.... besides nirman n myself, there r others who value the idea of writing and sharing it with others.... if thats bores u we never pulled u dragged u or pushed u to post in this thread....there r zillion of stars in the sky.. why did u pick the one we chose !!!!

ruina.. am a novice myself.. but like ur work.... keep writing n posting... also do encourage others to drop by n share their articles with us////....

thank u ma_chul...but i am not good at writing ...well i dont write much like u and niman ji .....i just try to write....

Ma_chul,
well said!
Jhyam putali is a loser. He/she can't do nothing beside bitchin'.
Ya just ignore him/her and keep writing.
Foe

am the same ruina...
ty foe !!

nahh u are lot better than me.......
anyway thanks for encouragement though i heartly appreciate that..

Thnx ppl to keep this thread up...i will post more soon..lets sahre some more ppll.we r here to share...hope i ought to read more from all of u...and yeah ruina keep the good works...i ll wait to see more of ur writings...and please also post some comments...may they be good or bad...just post it...

i fear death..i fear love.
i fear smile ..i fear curse
coz my life is seven years drought.....
i have been sitting all along
with speechless and unconsciouss
when i closed my eyes i felt something cold
i touched it ....it was tears.
i don know whats life coz its seven year drought..

Here is new one from my side...dedicated to all the nepalies affected directly or indirectly by the conflicct...Hoping for the best to happen in Nepal..Let Nepal Live forever

"Reality bites"

Dead, Dead and Dead people everywhere.
The souls searching the reasons for death,
Death searching the traces of soul.
Playing grounds turning into killing terraces,
Faces searching way out of mazes.
Blood, Blood and Blood everywhere,
How can you make it even more red???
What are you killing for,
when the place is already dead!!!
Now,you seems a guard to me,
Its amazing what your blind bullets see.
You say you are here to save,
What is there to save when the place is already a grave.
Well is it just a time of change,
or are we the people just out of range!!!???

-Nirvan

Hey aani nice piece from u ruina...big hands for ur nice piece of works...hey machul aani don't u think aali subject change garera lekhnu paryo aabo...i have tried one and post it just before....u too post some new stuff yaar..i will wait for one from ur side..KEEP ROCKING>>>>...