FInally its here most awaited MV of this fall BEDANA a presention of NEPOPrecords Subaa ft. Supoks.......https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lYAYVU9N8o8

सुधार गर्न पर्ने ठाउँहरु नभएको होइन, तर पनि प्रयास राम्रो छ, अब आउने भिडियोहरु अझ स्तरीय हुँदै जाउन्, शुभकामना... 

Camera man Seems to be a pervert..why is he focusing more on her azz then her face?

this is indie type music video. I like it. Try to give more amateurish look to your upcoming videos, I'll keep 'liking'.. all of them. lyrics ma 'kasari baachu(live) ' bhanda, kasari bhaachu(break).. po sunido rahecha(ha ha ha).. ali nepali para mai, dherai swang nagari gaayema, dherai ramro huney thiyo.
I'm sharing it on my facebook :D 

On the contrary, I think the cinematography and edit was done well enough.

I like the flow, but I'd question the vocalist ability to sing it well. The lyrics also seems a little mundane.

Also, could there be a little more Nepaleseness? For a second I thought both were reggaeton stars.The girl looked clearly out of sorts, and her mannerisms were highly affected or perhaps coerced.

Overall a fair effort, there are ample opportunities for improvement.

 "कसरी बाचु म "---गीत चाँही sad type ko, Video ma keti ko "Chaak Dekhaune" ? 
Ali simple tarikale prastut gareko bhaye ramro hune thiyo...

"this is indie type music video. I like it. Try to give more amateurish look to your upcoming videos, I'll keep 'liking'.. all of them. lyrics ma 'kasari baachu(live) ' bhanda, kasari bhaachu(break).. po sunido rahecha(ha ha ha)."

The less said about the video, the better. If people are so uncomfortable singing in Nepali or don't have command of the language and vocabulary, why not simply sing it in English?

Looking into baachu sounding like bhaachu doesn't surprise me in today's nepali society. If you listen to Kantipur's news presenters, they can't even say "cha" anymore. They make it sound like "Sa". Only people that could relate to that must be the SMS gals of yesteryears :).  I don't know who has instilled this idea in us that speaking with a "forced-accent" makes us sound better than simply speaking Nepali.

Right on the money Pulsar. As I revisited it again, the entire song looks affected, with feigned emotions and few forced accent as you mentioned. But then perhaps Kishor Limboo could provide a little more insight on this, he recently wrote an interesting article about Hindi music's invasion in Nepalese culture, I'd like to listen more about Westernization of Nepalese music as well.

My take is simple, sing like an American when you sing a Pearl Jam number, but when singing in Nepali, kindly sing like Kumar Basnet, it depicts our tradition more effectively.

 

Hmm good song. Good voice, and even better presentation. Good Job.

 Suru ma ali naramro hola ki jasto lageko thyo, tara purai sune pachi ramro lagyo. Keep it up. 

Video was pretty good
Lyrics was not bad
Rhythm was fair

Actors were OK.. the singer actor wasn't the greatest looking though...
Voice sucked.

overall I have seen worse.. this was not too bad!

The song is good I give 5/5 for the effort. To all the fu((kin haters. I bet that you have never created anything in your entire life. I bet that you sit in front of Fox/Zee/Sony TV and watch American or Indian Idol and Saregama and think you know everything about music to post degrading comment about our fellow Nepali brother trying to create a good music. That's the fu((kin typical Nepali mentality that cannot encourage any creativity and instead bash the looks of the singer. So either go and create something meaningful or fu(k yourself.
Having said that I have couple of suggestions for the creators. You did a good job and I bet with right mindset you can create something really wonderful. Forget the haters in this thread and take that as an challenge to create something really wonderful.  
Here are some of my feedbacks:
Lyrics is pretty good. I don't know much about rapping but seems pretty OK. Music is decent.
Story is very harsh. I would brighten it a little bit more. People already have so many problems with their life. They don't want to see a sad story.
Video is kind of raw. I would have liked to see the guys attire a little refined. It didn't jive well that the girl was a hottie while her boyfriend's looks (from behind) was unpolished. I don't know maybe that was the intention in the video. Also the previous comment that the girl's ass is focussed more should be taken into consideration. It makes the girl look kind of cheap. 
Once again good effort from you guys and hope that in the future we will get to see you guys make some more good songs.  

One more thing for the haters. Obviously the guy put the music up for free in Youtube and you're not paying for it either. He and his crew must have spent their time and resources to make this video happen. The least you can give them is some constructive critisism. So if you don't have anything constructive to say to them then rather don't say it. In fact I wonder if you haters ever supported Nepali music. How do you expect Nepali artists to make it big if you don't support it? Arun Thapa, Narayan Gopal, Bhatkta Raj Acharya all lived and died in poverty because of the lack of support for their profession. With the talent they had, they should have been living like Kings in Nepal. Fu(k you all buddhi nabhaka sala ho..

Wow fountaindew, does it always have to be personal? I am not a hater, I just called spade a spade! But you cussing out others - is that mature? Kindly ask yourself!

  Rapper sang in a low scale that made this song better. Good that you did not sing through your nose like the last video(forgot the name of the song).

 fountaindew, 

Bro, timi teti nai satisfied chau video bata bhanechi.. kina FEEDBACK ni dinchau.. khuruuka hami jasta hater lai gali deu na.. timra ti FEEDBACK bhanne sabda ni Criticism sanga milna jancha.. "Here are some of my FEEDBACKS".. LOL.. sathi timi narayan Gopal jasta gayak ko example dinchau ra poverty ko kura garchau.. k garun ta.. tyo bela Youtube thiyenah.. they are great idols Nepal ever had.. tara k garne.. technology thiyenah rich huna lai.. ahile technology cha tara narayan gopal jasta gayak chainan,,, yestai FEEDBACK nachahine ra video ma kehi nabhaka effort dine gayak haru matrai chan...

lau maile ni bhande.. GREAT EFFORT.. pheri pheri nikalnu hola yestai yestai video.. 

Mera due sabda..

La feri tehi kura. That's why ta haru sanga kura garera faida chaina. I said give constructive criticism. That means that give them an opportunity to improve, not bash their looks or belittle their efforts:

Yeha pad mora ho constructive criticism bhaneko yesto huncha.

"सुधार गर्न पर्ने ठाउँहरु नभएको होइन, तर पनि प्रयास राम्रो छ, अब आउने भिडियोहरु अझ स्तरीय हुँदै जाउन्, शुभकामना"

Belittle garne bhaneko yesto huncha

"Actors were OK.. the singer actor wasn't the greatest looking though...
Voice sucked."

Murkha keta ho. Pahile constructive criticism garna sikh. Ani tes pachi ma sanga kura garna aija.

Kaha kaha bata auchan murkha haru. hare raam. 

 fountaindew ko chitta bujhaunai bhayepani lekhnai paryo,

- vocal > not good except the chorus singer i.e. "kasari baachu yo..."
- lyrics > ok ok
- music composition > good
- videography > sucks
- models > good

And here's my explanation:
 
Vocal: the rapper's voice is very flat, and it sounds dull. have you heard Prabin Giri read news on Nepal Television? sounds like that. idk if he meant to make him sound like that or that's the best he can do, but his voice utterly failed to please my ears. However, the chorus singer's voice is good (the guy who sang "kasari bachu yo" part).
Lyrics: same old boring tragic lyrics, nothing new but still, has a story. I'd say the lyrics is good but there are some words that could have been replaced by better words. But it seems like they wanted to create good rhyme which compromised the words.
Music composition: Doesn't have too many musical instruments involved but still rich sound. Simple yet well composed.
Videography: This is where the boys failed quite very well. First thing, the video quality is very poor. It's not sharp at all, looks like it came straight out of a beginner/semi pro dslr with very minimal editing. Second, videographer focusses on girls butt quite a bit. That makes the girl look cheap as others have pointed out. It also distracts audience. The song is about a tragic lovestory, not about a jolly romantic story. Video is out of focus at some points, maybe the videographer wasn't able to focus quickly enough. And, it's shaky sometimes. 
Models: The girl looks good and so do the other two guys. However, girl's dresses are immodest. I was able to notice her in two different dresses during the video and both dresses were very similar except the color. I ask myself "Why?" and the most obvious answer to me is "they want to spice up the video" but too much of a spice is not good. Moreover, videographer focussing more on her butt makes the video more sucky. 

I don't know if this is their first video or they have already produced a few before. If this is their first or second video, I give 5.5/10 if this is their 3rd+ video then it ranks 3.5/10.

fountaindew, this is for you:
everyone doesn't have to like the video. Some people honestly don't like the video, others might not like it just because they don't like someone do/try to do something good. There can be various reasons behind it. Also, people have tendency to point out bad more than good things so it's natural to get comments on weaknesses more than on strengths when you ask for criticism. So, please stop using obscene words at others, it just makes you look like an idiot. 

-Jantare

 Not a big hiphop fan, but if there is melody i'd love it, just like this.

 And about my comment, chorus's vocal is good , rapper's idk either. Video don't even goes at all with the song. Chick gotta fine a$$. 

fountaindew, kina tatteko, timro girlfriend/boyfriend cha ki k ho video ma.
ramro laagey ramro , naramro laagey naramro bhanney ho,
tesma timlai k ko tauko dukhai..

ani free ma payeko song rey, ??? k hamley tini haru lai 'eh song yaha sajha ma rakha bhaneko hora?'
tini haru aafailey free ma rakhey pachi, timi chahi kina tuk-na-betuk ko kura garcheu hah? 

youtube ma free hudaina, my dear friend, you post a video, monetize it , youtube place an ad and everytime someone watches it , they make money,.. ma mula kehi nagari mahina ma 200-300 bucks banauchu( I do post gadget reviews once in a while though, that's the trick) .. yeh.. herney haru lai free nai huncha video haru, dekhauney haruley paisa banaucha..

ani fountaindew, don't generalize everyone okay?? that's the lesson number 1. yeha online ma jati ufrey ni huncha, real life ma?? if you act like here, you might hurt yourself.. take it as a suggestion / advice whatever.

tesailey, dherai bak-bak garney hoina, khurukka gayera aafno kaam garney, hoina bhaney pheri gala-sala padkai dinchu...

hahahahhahahaha..